short story slam week 54, sunday whligig
short story slam week 54, nature, water, land, fresh air, freedom, and confidence
Whirligig 79
THIS WEEK'S WORDS come from "Burning the Old Year" by Naomi Shihab Nye:
swallow, doorknob, sizzle, marry, partial, swirling, orange, shuffle, blazing, crackle, vegetables, smallest
Swallowing hard, Melinda Hudson works hard, bearing
her husband's confrontation of her expenses last night,
why does she feel No guilty of her free time at Aspen?
she needs mood, fresh air, and upgraded point of view,
women gather near Fountain square, they chat, relaxing,
Melinda has fun watching, instead of sitting at her bedroom floor,
weaving her thoughts in restricted space.
a fish swims in ocean or in river, Melinda never regrets her marriage,
her orange pride to her college, and her sizzling desire to win fame.
crackling up herself, she often obtains partial satisfaction and with smallest son
in Tulan University, Melinda does sense the distant ties in between
texting message Cory, James before going to bed, telling the folks about her
expected needs, her swirling heart got blazing fires, a lady with strong disagreement
walks by her house at mid night, Shelly won't quit believing that things shall change
on Melinda and Derek...but...
when a relation goes fishy, both man and woman are upset, overall, Melinda agrees
that she enjoys her freedom some times, but not over doing that many...housewife duty
indeed places her on shopping mall....
she wishes the world to turn steadily, not doubting our own confidence
thanks to Felicia Smith, Eric Schmidt, Lawrence Page, Sergey Brin, Cory Williams,
and Jerry Brown for keep an eye on her resident, Fort Smith, Arkansas,
we refuse to think of Jean Edward Smith's romance, we remain good
on our home, job, freedom, and story spinning.
deep, well done.
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